I come from outsideI'm really tired
Friends are also tired
There is a bed
I mean you, dude
You always stay there
So I can sleep there
Wash my hands
Fly from the land
Go to the bed
Looks like dead
Fall in asleep
Go into the deep
Be in the dream
Feels like a stream
I love you bed
Feels like in dad
It is the best feeling of mine
I can't find others in the brain
Isn't it good?
답글삭제Your ode personified bed. Bed became your father and gives a feeling that you cannot find in other places. This ode is simple but well written with good rhymes and structure. Good job!
답글삭제TA Hyebin