-This story is really excited that it is fantasy stories. There are so many new things which are so unfamiliar with us. Have you heard Quidich? How about muggle? These are the words that wizards and witches use. Isn't it interested? There is also school named 'Hogwat' in magic world. In Hogwat, there are some interested and unfamiliar subjects. There are magic of course, transforming tricks, magical medicine, magical plants, the history of magic, how to defend dark magic, and others. aren't them interested/
-It is also impressed sometimes. We can feel it when it is climax like when Sirious, Harry's god-father dies, Voldmote returns, or Tom Liddle disappears. It gives us sadness and happiness at the same time. When sadness and happiness adds, the result of that addition is impress. We can feel the impress that we can't describe with letters.-In conclusion, I think 'Harry Potter' gives excited and impressed feeling at the same time so I think it is deserved to be the best book I have read.
Han dong,
답글삭제I appreciate your descriptive essay and I hope you enjoyed writing it. Since this is a descriptive essay, I wish that you had described the book more. You told me, but did not describe to me the book. In addition, please take note of your use of grammar and syntax, and proper adjective. Overall, I enjoyed reading your essay and I look forward to reading more in-depth writing from you in the future.
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답글삭제I like Harry potter too!
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