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2011년 12월 30일 금요일

The book I enjoyed the most

        -I have many books I enjoyed. There are 'The secret of shadow forest' or 'mystery of kalders'. They can be the best I think. Maybe, there would be people feels interested about these books even though they listened only the title of books. However, I have my best book, and its title is 'Harry Potter'. It is excited and impressed. It got so many prizes so I wouldn't need to talk about its popularity.
        -This story is really excited that it is fantasy stories. There are so many new things which are so unfamiliar with us. Have you heard Quidich? How about muggle? These are the words that wizards and witches use. Isn't it interested? There is also school named 'Hogwat' in magic world. In Hogwat, there are some interested and unfamiliar subjects. There are magic of course, transforming tricks, magical medicine, magical plants, the history of magic, how to defend dark magic, and others. aren't them interested/
        -It is also impressed sometimes. We can feel it when it is climax like when Sirious, Harry's god-father dies, Voldmote returns, or Tom Liddle disappears. It gives us sadness and happiness at the same time. When sadness and happiness adds, the result of that addition is impress. We can feel the impress that we can't describe with letters.
        -In conclusion, I think 'Harry Potter' gives excited and impressed feeling at the same time so I think it is deserved to be the best book I have read.

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  1. Han dong,

    I appreciate your descriptive essay and I hope you enjoyed writing it. Since this is a descriptive essay, I wish that you had described the book more. You told me, but did not describe to me the book. In addition, please take note of your use of grammar and syntax, and proper adjective. Overall, I enjoyed reading your essay and I look forward to reading more in-depth writing from you in the future.

    Happy new year and see you in class!

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